The Exiled Nation

EVENTS THAT HURT (1)
A Story from the Liberation Road

By Dr. Sunday de John

She grabbed my wrist before I saw her coming.

I was still wet from the river, my rugged clothes clinging to my small frame, the coolness of the Pariak water lingering on my skin when her hand closed around my right wrist like a door shutting. I looked up to see a woman standing in the shade of the enormous tamarind tree at the riverbank, its branches spreading over the water like an elder extending his arms over a crowd of children he is trying to protect. Her name, I would later learn, was Achol. The way she looked at me, not with cruelty or mockery but with a sorrow that had learned to wear the mask of laughter, is something I have never forgotten. Not in all the years since. Not once.

"What is your name?" she asked.
"Sunday," I replied.

She laughed, a loud and full sound, like the laughter of people who find something both amusing and unbearable at once. But then her laughter softened into something more serious, and she asked me the question she had been leading up to:

"Are you the kind that can reach Bilpam?"
Bilpam. The word hung in the air between us, heavy with significance. Even at my age, I grasped what it represented: it was not merely a location. It was a challenge. It was a passage. It was the realm beyond all things perilous, where boys either returned transformed or did not return at all. I had heard adults whisper about it, similar to how people discuss things they both yearn for and fear.

Achol did not wait for my response. She spoke in our language, the one that resides in the chest before it reaches the mouth, and expressed what she truly meant: the people of Bahr el Ghazal were toying with children. Someone had looked at boys like me, small enough that my wrist fit easily in a woman's hand, and decided we were soldiers. She questioned, "How can you send a good child like this one into the wilderness?"

"I want you to be my friend," she said, gently pulling me closer. "I will take you to my mother. She will care for you as if you were her own."
I stood very still, feeling a mix of emotions wash over me.

Inside me, something rose, not anger, not fear, but a clarity that surprised me. I thought of my grandmother. I didn’t need to close my eyes to see her; she was always there, just beyond everything, like the horizon always is. I thought of my auntie and my uncles, the particular way I was held in that family, not perfectly, but held nonetheless, even with hardship. My mother had died before I could know her face. I had been told this truth the way children are told difficult things: plainly, and too early. Yet her absence had not left me empty; it had instead filled the space she left with the love of those around me.
I looked at Achol and said, "I have a family: a wonderful grandmother, an auntie, and uncles who care about me. I don’t need a new home here by this river."

I continued, "I am going to Bilpam, and I will return alive. I will find them again."

The silence that followed carried a heavy weight. Achol stared at me, this small, dripping boy who had just turned her down with the calmness of someone three times my age, and a series of emotions flickered across her face. Disbelief. Recognition.

Then, unexpectedly, something resembling pride.
"Eei! Ye ke do ke nyic jam?" she asked softly. This one truly knows how to speak.

Her gaze then shifted to my left wrist.

On my wrist was a bangle carved from elephant tusk, TUNG-AKOON, as we called it, curved in the style of those worn by girls and beautiful, smooth, and pale like river sand. Around my neck hung a string of special beads, Majong-Athut, rare ones that catch the light and hold it.

Achol gazed at the ornaments as one does at cherished things that are just out of reach. Then she smiled, a smile that hinted at a joke but was underpinned by a deep, genuine fear.

"Give them to me," she urged. "You won't need them. Before you reach Murle land, you will be finished. By the time you get to Gumuruk, it will all be over. Why let a beautiful bangle end up buried in the ground?"

She said it lightly, but I sensed the weight beneath her words. She was not mocking me; she was terrified for me. She had likely heard about the fate of those on the road to Pibor, the recruits who were ambushed between Kolnyang and Pibor, the ones who never arrived, their names fading into whispers and then silence. She was a woman sitting by a tamarind tree on a riverbank, watching children march toward a war that would not thank them for their sacrifice. In that moment, she was doing the only thing she knew how to do: trying to save at least one of us.

I pulled my wrist free and held the bangle against my skin for a moment, feeling its cool weight. Then, I turned and walked away.

Akot, who was older, always nearby, and watchful in the easy way of someone who has accepted responsibility without making a show of it, stood a few steps back, witnessing everything. He stepped forward, whispered something to Achol that I could not hear, and then we left together, walking back to our camp on the other side of the road. Neither of us spoke. The river's sound flowed behind us, and the tamarind tree remained rooted in its place.

I did not look back, yet I sensed her gaze upon me.
Before all of that, before Achol, before the wristgrab, before the question about Bilpam, there had been the fish.

That was how the afternoon began, and it is the moment I often revisit when I want to remember what happiness felt like on that road. Akot had taken me to the riverbank, as he frequently did. He appreciated having me by his side; I was useful and eager, a small, strong boy who could be relied upon to pierce each catch cleanly onto the fish stringer while he baited the next hook. There was a sense of pride in that, in being helpful to someone who knew what he was doing. We made a wonderful team, the two of us.

On that particular afternoon, the river was generous. Akot pulled fish from the water one after another, and each time the line tightened, I was ready. Together, we filled the stringer until it was heavy with our catch. Afterward, we walked to our usual spot, a place away from camp that felt like our own, claimed through repetition and habit. There, we roasted the fish over the fire and enjoyed our meal.

We ate until we were full. We felt genuinely, completely full, the kind of fullness that feels like a small miracle after days of subsisting on dry fruits called "Anyetuek" from the Nyieth tree, with each fruit counted as a blessing because there was nothing else to eat. On those ordinary days of hunger, Anyetuek was everything. But on this afternoon, there was fish, fire, and the river nearby, and it was enough to make you forget, for an hour, that you were a boy marching toward war or even death.

After we ate, we returned to the water and played in the shallows. We playfully splashed our feet in a manner we referred to as Malotha, laughing until our sides ached. The sun moved across the sky above us without our noticing, for that is what beneficial hours do; they refuse to be counted.

Those were the hours that held us together: the afternoons spent fishing, the games of Malotha. Beny Bullen Kot Beny Adhiac, his brothers Makuei and Machiek, and I ran through Pariak with the carefree spirit of boys who had momentarily escaped the weight of history. Karlo, the soldier in our es**rt and a skilled hunter, sometimes returned to camp with a duiker or a bushbuck draped over his shoulders or with guinea fowl, transforming the whole camp into a brief celebration around his catch. Those evenings felt like a reward from the world for something we couldn’t quite define.

Pariak held us for a season. Outside, the war progressed with its own logic: the SPLA had taken Gemeiza, Gut-Makur, Kor Englisi, and Torit, tightening their grip around Juba. We children understood the situation in a way that only children in wartime can: in fragments, through overheard conversations, and by observing the subtle changes on adults' faces when certain words were mentioned.

Then the road opened once more, and we began our journey.

The route to Pibor had been sealed by something too dark to discuss openly; recruits were ambushed between Kolnyang and Pibor, boys who had taken the same road we were meant to travel but had not emerged on the other side. So, instead, we went to Torit. Then we moved on to Kiala, a town referred to in hushed tones as one that had endured devastating war, the very place where Commander Nyacigak Nyaciluk had fallen. His name was uttered with the special reverence reserved for those who die in the service of something greater than themselves.
From Kiala, we moved on to Kapoeta, which felt like an entirely different world.

We stayed in a suburb called Hela Tarawa, where senior Jesh-Amer fighters had dug deep trenches in the earth, waiting for Taposa fighters who sometimes came under the cover of night. There was a palpable sense of danger in Kapoeta; it hung in the air like the anticipation of an approaching storm, but life thrived there as well. Doctor Achol Marial Deng, whose house was already filled with guests, generously opened the remaining space to us without a second thought. Older boys like Mabor Muorwel Reech guided us through the town, and we engaged in the usual territorial disputes that boys have always fought, scrapping with kids from Hela Rei as we established our presence in this new place.

We were children caught in the midst of a war, and we remained, in some way, still just children.

The lorry was called Ok-Abuosh, a large blue Isuzu that arrived one day like a promise, transporting us out of Kapoeta toward Mogos. We climbed aboard with the excitement of boys who had been walking for months, finally having a machine to carry us. For a brief moment, the road moved beneath us rather than beneath our feet, and the wind rushed through the open sides of the lorry, making it feel almost like flying.

Then Ok-Abuosh broke down.
It broke down once more.
And then we continued on foot.

The sun at Jebel A***n offers no apologies. The mountain rises abruptly from the flat panorama, tall, its crown stripped of trees and shrubs, a geological monument laid bare to the elements. There is no refuge from what descends upon you there. The heat radiated from the earth through the soles of our feet, while it descended from the sky onto the tops of our heads, converging in the middle of us. We trudged through it because there was no other way forward. One foot. Then the other. Then again.

Mogos was a remote outpost on the edge of the Kosongor Desert, a name that still feels like it should be whispered. Michael Ater Deng was there with his soldiers. When they spotted us approaching, this weary column of boys and men trudging through the heat haze, parched and exhausted, they rushed toward us. Not to ask questions. Not to check papers. They came to find us water.
Water. There is no more honest currency in the world.

Beyond Mogos lay the desert crossing to Kor-Agerep, and beyond that, Boma. The journey twisted back on itself again and again; "tortuous" is the word, and it is precise. Yet we kept walking. The journey was the work. This was what it meant to want a country so fiercely that you were willing to carry that desire within you across deserts and mountains, ambush roads, and all the grief the journey could inflict upon you.


I survived Murleland. I survived Gumuruk. I did not go into the ground before I crossed any of the places Achol had named. The bangle remained on my wrist, and the Majong-Athut beads stayed around my neck. I returned, not immediately, not easily, but eventually, to my grandmother, my aunt, and my uncles, who cared for me and had always cared for me.

I kept my promise. I came back alive.

Everything, the fish Akot pulled from the river, the Malotha games in the shallow waters, the woman under the tamarind tree who grabbed a boy's wrist to prevent him from walking toward his death, the dry fruits, the broken lorry, the pitiless mountain, and the soldiers who ran for water, served one purpose: we deserved a country. Our people, scattered and diminished, were told their lives were worth less than others. Nevertheless we deserved to plant a flag somewhere on this earth and claim it as ours.
We were not wrong.

We were not wrong to believe in our right to a future. We were not wrong to march toward it. We were not wrong to be children on that road, adorned with our bangles and beads, relishing fish-filled afternoons, our small hearts ignited by what the adults called liberation, while we simply called it going home.

Now, new oppressors have emerged, and this time, they wear our faces. They speak our languages and traveled the same roads we once walked. Some even fought against us, while others cast their votes during the referendum against what they now call their country. In the stillness of a night that should feel peaceful, I find myself in deep contemplation, holding the bangle on my wrist and grappling with questions that offer no easy answers:

What has happened to our resilience? Did we traverse deserts and harsh terrains, prepare ourselves, and return to confront the enemy only for opportunists to seize our land, exploit it, and oppress us? Have we surrendered our country to those consumed by pride, addicted to hedonism, sexual pleasure, and overwhelmed by their desires to squander our dollars on foreign partners? Will their children thrive while they are raised in wealth obtained through the blood of martyrs, whose own children are left to suffer the pain of abandonment, poverty, ill health, and hunger?

What have we done to the country we once built with the hopes and dreams of our children?

Till then, yours truly, Mr. Teetotaler!


To be continued.

: Where can South Sudan turn?

Long ago, before there was even a county of South Sudan or Sudan, the tribes that still exist were part of the bustling Nilotic trade, to which our motherland contributed gold, fish, cattle, agricultural products, and even (sadly) slaves. Trade has always been an essential part of economic life in our region. However, that historically bustling trade has slowed to a trickle. As much as our country needs to be part of the world economy, we have failed to find a successful footing. If we take our petroleum, our supply of which is dwindling, we trade almost nothing. Worse, when trade is discussed, it invariably concerns selling off other fixed resources, such as our gold.

Without economic development, how can our nation hope to maintain its sovereignty, let alone take care of our people? Without being part of the world economy, how can we hope to build the nation for which we hope and for which others have paid such a high price in battle?
A couple of days ago, the 43rd anniversary of the formation of the Sudan People’s Liberation Movement/Army in Juba was celebrated to highlight how much our citizens love their country and the sacrifices made by all 64-plus tribes in liberating themselves, and no doubt our people are resilient in their hope for a better South Sudan.

We must trade. We must find trading partners. We must find trading partners willing to invest in developing our productivity. Where do we find them? There is an already identifiable group, one that contains many of our peoples’ old trading partners. It is the group of nations brought together under the Abraham Accords. As a potential agricultural powerhouse blessed with water, something that most of those Abraham Accord nations lack, we could once again be providing cattle and goats to our neighbors. We could grow hay for their dairy livestock. Could we raise fish? We could be growing hydroponic vegetables and fruits. We could be producing nuts, something for which our neighbors have an almost endless appetite.

We cannot continue to go hat in hand to ask for support from wealthier countries. The world of charity has been replaced by transactional diplomacy, a system of give-and-take, benefiting all. South Sudan must once again become a place of trade.

What will happen if we do not become a trading nation? First, our people will suffer. Second, those resources we have, such as our gold, will be taken without benefit to us and our country. Third, our hungry people become a new kind of slaves, soldiers lured to fight for others in the hope of feeding their families.

What will happen if we do? That, of course, will depend on the choices we make as a country. With the right leadership, we can build our infrastructure, including a system of dikes and canals to reduce flooding, roads and railroads so people can move about, and a system of healthcare and education so that our young can grow up educated, healthy, and proud. We can make sure that people have jobs that allow them dignity and the freedom to live as they wish. We can make sure that nobody feels alienated from their fellow South Sudanese so that tribal identity does not mean continuing the ages-old tradition of war against one’s neighbors.

How do we begin? The first step of a journey is always the most difficult because it requires us to fully commit. We need our foreign office to make that commitment, to set up an office specifically to work towards an affiliation with the Abraham Accord nations, to come up with clear ideas to bring to our neighbors, ideas that will give them a reason for investing and give us the hope for moving forward.

We must also commit, as a nation, to ensuring that no politician, fixer, or bureaucrat will profit from their work towards this goal until the goal has been accomplished. No bribes, no baksheesh, no perks or Kitu kidogo—only the just rewards for work well done, for real service to the people of our motherland.

~Deng Mayik Atem
Publisher of Ramciel Magazine, author of Jumping Over the Ram, and currently studying leadership and Ethics at Harvard Kennedy School of Government
He is reachable at [email protected]

NCA and NSS have failed. their mandates to deliver and then implicate innocents. South Sudanese on social media

Dr Riek. Machar alongside others must be free because quack forsenic experts failed to testify the allegations regarding Nasir garrisons massacre

I have a different opinion towards the South African digital forensic investigator. Ratlhogo Peter Calvin Rafadi, I can say that South Sudan's sovereignty is under threat because the very institutions that dealt with such forensics are compromised. If the government trained capable individuals in security, there would be no way that a country could bring in quack forensic experts who have never been registered with the South African government. The National Communication Authority has failed to deliver what was expected from the institutions. The national security service has also failed to deliver the mandates that protect the sovereignty of our country but focus of dealing with Facebook users who are not national security threats and leaves those who are loot and kill innocents South Sudanese.

Our sovereignty is under attack when the South Sudanese government hires people based on who attended Bilpham rather than who attended school to study. President Kiir Mayardit ought to refrain from visiting Ethiopia or the relatives of veterans who are unfit to assist your government in its endeavors. excellent services. to the South Sudanese people
Quack people are not needed for communication or information; this is for people who went to school and studied it, not for people who work on computer packages overseas and then come back to Juba and tell President Kiir Mayardit, "I have a bachelor's degree in ICT with a focus on cyber security."

JUST IN: Woman Delivers Triplets in Rumbek East.

Mrs. Nyanaliir Thonde Marol, wife of Achot Rok Reec, has given birth to healthy triplets,two girls and one boy,at Pachong Primary Health Care Center in Rumbek East County.
The family and community celebrate this joyful occasion.

The mother and her three children are reported to be in good health.
Congratulations to the Pan Rok Reec family on this wonderful blessing.

President Kiir Mayardit must revoke or send 150 officers to the frontline, especially to Akobo. The list has individuals who have never gone for basic NSS training. The list has members of tiger divisions. who are not fit for the NSS.
Publicizing the promotions of national security services has slammed the integrity of our national security services. I have researched how members of state secret services are being promoted. Some security analysts told me that the National Security members are not known by the public. Simply, they will never get the information they are assigned for.

Now that everyone is aware of the system, I have never seen America or Israel publish the names and ranks of their officers who work for the FBI or Mossad agents. One is aware. who are generals in the National Services. Generals... I don't dislike or have any issues with those who have been promoted. I didn't believe that National Security agents were exposed in this way.

BREAKING NEWS:

Gen. Stephen Buay Rolnyang has declared military alignment with the SPLA-IO to remove Juba regime out of power:

Security Advisory to All Members

This is a security advisory issued by the leadership of the South Sudan People’s Liberation Movement / South Sudan People’s Liberation Army (SSPLM/SSPLA).

The security situation in the country is expected to deteriorate significantly. Large-scale offensive and defensive military operations are anticipated involving government forces and armed opposition groups. In this context, the SSPLM/SSPLA affirms its political alignment with the SPLA-IO, the UPA Unified Forces, and other armed groups engaged in opposition to government forces.

All members are hereby advised to exercise heightened caution. Those who are particularly vulnerable are strongly encouraged, where possible, to leave the country temporarily, as the conflict is likely to expand and affect wide areas nationwide.

Members are further advised to remain vigilant against deliberate misinformation. Certain political and military actors are actively promoting a false narrative portraying the conflict as an ethnic war between Dinka and Nuer communities. This characterization is inaccurate and must be firmly rejected. Members are urged to resist ethnic polarization and to remain focused on pursuing political change through lawful, principled, and coordinated means, whether within or outside existing systems.

Your personal safety and responsible conduct are of utmost importance.

Let it cook💪💪✊✊

The death of Omer El Bashir should serve as a powerful lesson for all leaders. At one time, he held immense authority and influence, commanding power that seemed unshakable. Yet today, he is no more. His story is a reminder that power is temporary, leadership is accountable, and no position lasts forever. In the end, every leader is measured not by how strong they appeared, but by the legacy they leave behind and the lives they touched—for better or worse.